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Show me love
Under diamonds above
Emptiness your heart and thought

Punctured skies
Hazzard Lights
You leave things so unclear

Show me love
Over echoed whispers
Siren cries
I can comprehend no more

Punctured cries
Siren skies
Speaking truth under hazzard lies

Poorly maintained
Nerves
Swinging like chains
©2004-2009 ~k0i
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Tell me your interpretations, I think by reading it you can guess what it is about, or what it pertains to.

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:iconevildeathpenguin:
I started out thinking it was like...false love...lust maybe. But then It kinda swirved into deception against a REAL love...I dunno...I just get love out of it... :shrug:

It's good though!!! I liked reading it! I might print it out and hang it on my wall. I pick poems and do that... ^_^;

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be my guest

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:iconc0ldblood3db1tch:
As you may know, I am not good at comments. I get emotionally overwhelmed, and try too hard. All I can say is, wonderfully written. It has a lot of depth, and everyone will have their own interpritation. :hug: That's all I have. Hehe..I hide now.

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Make something
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and every word means something :D

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:iconc0ldblood3db1tch:
:hug:

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:heart: To all the wonderful friends I have made here. Thank you for supporting me. Without you...I have no purpose.

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:iconusanipanda:
Well written, I'd tell my interpratation but I'm too sick to think. >.>
:hug: I like it though.

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Crystalized matter doth hang from pristine bone.
:iconderexitusengel:
Um. I would guess that it was about death and the person who passed away watching over you.
:iconk0i:
Ineresting:D, thanks for commenting, I haven't heard from you in awhile... at least to me it feels that way.:chew: WB

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:iconderexitusengel:
Haven't been online too often.
Not feeling so great. Suppose I'm getting sick, but I refuse. hehe
Today was my one month aniversary with my lovely b/f. ^.^;
But anywho. Great work! Always love it!

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